I am soooo sorry for the delay. I have been finishing writing a whole chapter, and I didn't want to send anything until I had written all the...
That's really helpful. I still may post something for you all to critique, but it is incredibly kind of you to do this!
Okay, so tomorrow I'm wondering if it makes sense for me to put up a paragraph or so and have you guys pick at it and tell me where the language...
More details re: 1939-ish wooden boat. Okay, here are more details: So here are the data points from my research (from newspaper articles) and...
Thanks for the reply. I'm going to post some more data about the picture and see if that helps. This is a great start. I'll also list my...
Hi, I'm a writer working on a non-fiction book that takes place in Maui in the late 1930's. In 1939, the boat in the picture (15'-16' described...
